Thursday, December 02, 2004

FINAL PROJECT -- GET AND GIVE HELP HERE

Go ahead and post any questions, comments, concerns and replies related to the final project due at the end of class Monday.

I will check this page and respond:

Friday (12/3) between 4-6 pm and again between 9-10
Saturday (12/4) around 10 am and again around 8 or 9 pm
Sunday (12/5) around 10 am and again around 8 or 9 pm
and Monday (12/6) around 6 am

This is mainly a chance for you to get help from your peers. I've already given you lots of help in class so if I don't respond right away (or at all) I apologize, but them's the breaks.

41 Comments:

At 8:33 AM, Blogger jacob horowitz said...

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At 8:38 AM, Blogger jacob horowitz said...

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At 9:10 AM, Blogger Cecie Do[rk] said...

hey everybody. please help me with my essay. i need some editing help n all of that good stuff....
xoxx
CEcie

 
At 9:10 AM, Blogger AndyKendall said...

What is Victimization of cildren? What to I talk about?

 
At 9:11 AM, Blogger AndyKendall said...

I spelled children wrong. Ha!

 
At 9:12 AM, Blogger AndyKendall said...

I used inpropper grammer. Ha!

 
At 9:34 AM, Blogger Mr. Watrous said...

Victimization of children:

Usually/supposedly in war children and innocent bystanders are left out, and do not get involved in the fighting. In The Light in the Forest True Son was captured as a 4 year-old and taken to live with the Lenni Lenape. At the age of 15 he is again a captive, this time of the white people. This involvement of children, and the mis-treatment of them is considered victimization...making them victims.

Think of how Uncle Wilse treats True Son and Little Crane. Think of how Aunt Kate treats True Son. Think of how the Lenni Lenape treat them.

 
At 9:38 AM, Blogger AndyKendall said...

Thanks Mr. Watrous!

 
At 12:04 PM, Blogger Kadin Shurtz said...

Did Half-Arrow change at all through out the book?

 
At 12:20 PM, Blogger justin hewson said...

kadin what kind of a question is that? i know the answer! it is half arrow never changes he never moves or does anything he sits around and smokes.

 
At 12:20 PM, Blogger Anna Urbanova said...

i think that half arrow does change. becuase at first he doesn't want to leave true son. then at the end when he see how true son likes whites he ends up not wanting to talk to him or see him anymore. i think that is concidered changing.

 
At 12:21 PM, Blogger Nick Rios said...

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At 12:23 PM, Blogger Kadin Shurtz said...

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At 12:23 PM, Blogger Anna Urbanova said...

hey does anybody want to edit my essay. PLEASE
thanks to anyone who does.
THANKS

 
At 12:24 PM, Blogger justin hewson said...

a question for all of you ? have any of you not finished the book then you guys are very slow at reading.

 
At 12:24 PM, Blogger justin hewson said...

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At 12:25 PM, Blogger Nick Rios said...

He changed. If i was him I would not have changed. No changing. If you want to see a panda or listen to some Indian rap with Ludakrishna go to my blog thingy.

 
At 12:26 PM, Blogger justin hewson said...

a question for all of you ? have any of you not finished the book then you guys are very slow at reading.

 
At 1:06 PM, Blogger Amanda S. said...

Does anyone know some ways that the Settler's society was imperfect? I only have that some people tricked Native Americans to get land, they kept slaves, and that several of the people hate Native Americans without a good reason. Help!!

<3,
Amanda

 
At 1:20 PM, Blogger NtN-Moon said...

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At 1:36 PM, Blogger scubasteve12345 said...

Stephen Rooen

I need help puting in and finding a good spot in my essay for the 5 ideas. Please help!!!!!!!

 
At 1:57 PM, Blogger Sarah Prather said...

nicole
nielson


I need help with my intro paragraph.

 
At 2:02 PM, Blogger nicky said...

nicole
nielson


I need help with my intro paragraph.

 
At 2:05 PM, Blogger josh sager said...

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At 2:07 PM, Blogger nicky said...

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At 2:08 PM, Blogger chanelle herrera said...

sorry josh. i thought i was logged in as me, chanelle... sorry.........

 
At 2:10 PM, Blogger chanelle herrera said...

I need help writtting my letter.

 
At 2:11 PM, Blogger chanelle herrera said...

if u help me then ill help u nicky.. ok???

 
At 2:11 PM, Blogger nicky said...

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At 2:31 PM, Blogger chanelle herrera said...

For my paper i am doing a letter from true son/ john butler to his white parents. i need help getting ideas to use and references because this book is very vwery confusing to me. If you have any ideas, email msn or blog me. thanks!!! much appreciation luv chanelle

 
At 12:36 PM, Blogger Anne said...

anna i'll help edit yours cuz i have nothing to do, lol, email it to me, my email is anne.baldock@verizon.net

 
At 1:20 PM, Blogger Kiersten B said...

what is the easiest essay topic?

 
At 2:18 PM, Blogger Mr. Watrous said...

The letter doesn't require quotes, but rather references to specific events in the story (ex. suicide by may apple, uncle wilse scalping little crane, etc.)

I imagine the best way to work these into a letter would be one per paragraph. Make each the focus of that paragraph. This would work well for an essay.

I would suggest to those looking for the easiest paper to find the one most interesting to you. It's really hard to do something you hate or that isn't interesting to you. ...That's why you get two days in class to complete this paper :)

 
At 2:25 PM, Blogger Kiersten B said...

what if none of the topics you gave us are interesting to me? i dont know which one i can write 600 words in. maybe i can get 300 words but no more thatn that!

 
At 5:28 PM, Blogger brittany said...

hi everyone
this is brittany
HELP ME!!!!
i'm writting my rough draft and i have about 350 words but i was going to just start my conclusion. but i know i can't do 150 word just in one paragraph it would just keep going. so could anyone please help me i really need. oh by the way my topic is compare and contrast the n.a and settler culture i just need like 1 or 2 more paragraphs.
thanx

 
At 6:09 PM, Blogger brittany said...

this is brittany again
but i don't need your help anymore, i figured it out

 
At 6:10 PM, Blogger Kiersten B said...

can we write our rough draft on the computer? or does it have to be hand written? brittany i can help maybe.

 
At 8:46 PM, Blogger ~Champ said...

Wow, Hi, Mr. Watrous. I'm on B Team, and I found out everyone has a blog too so hi... You have lotsa comments BTW. And Rainelle said it'd be interesting if I posted a comment here. So um yeah I posted... Hi....

 
At 8:50 PM, Blogger Rainelle U. said...

I didn't actually said anything about putting my name down as well... Champ....

 
At 8:52 PM, Blogger ~Champ said...

You never said I couldn't...

 

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